EllesDee Posted October 2, 2007 Report Posted October 2, 2007 i do my best to smile when he's not around(will?), will he come back home, will he be the same? these are the things that i think about i never called on you beforethere's one thing i got to know: sometimes took this life for granted,never called you by your name,always tried to live right by you,could i be the one to blame? of all the things you could take from me,that's just too much pain to bear,trading on my life's ambitions,grant me please this one last prayer. begging, please god give him shelter,when the rain begins to fall,shine your light on him for guidance,when his back's against the wall. i will feel the fire burning,see him (i'm?) in the darkest night,almost taste the air he's breathing,hear the whispers of his thoughts. never had time for religions,always made my own decisions,never cared for reasons why,(?) ... my means i justify. are you gonna (?) ... waiting,come and stop this pain i'm hating,never thought this time would come,things were left unsaid and done. chorus (2x): i just wanna be with you,my heart won't beat againif our eyes can't meet againthis just (can't?) (be the end?) i don't need your news debriefingthey don't give me no (relieving?)i don't need your love reportsnothing's fair in love and war making drama out of crisishuman lives get (have?) market pricesshould i care what's right or wrongif he never comes back home please correct/add anything that needs modifying! Quote
moretti Posted October 6, 2007 Report Posted October 6, 2007 hi, mate! nice work!just a few things to add... btw, i have the album version of the tune (will?), will he come back home, will he be the same?when will they come back home, will they be the same? see him (i'm?) in the darkest night,see, i'm in the darkest night, are you gonna (?) ... waiting,are you gonna (?) can't stop waiting this just (can't?) (be the end?)this just can't be the end they don't give me no (relieving?)they don't give me no relieving human lives get (have?) market priceshuman lives have market prices cheers, Quote
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